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Date submitted:

May 4, 2012

By:

Makenzie

School:

Genesee

Age:

11

Content:

Individual Winner! The reason our class needs a picnic at the Silverwood Theme Park is because we have worked hard all year and have yet to have a field trip. We want to have something fun and entertaining. All of us are waiting for our fieldtrip somewhere. We would LOVE to go to Silverwood. Some of us don’t have enough money to go during the summer. Sometimes friends can’t spend much time together at fun places like Silverwood. Especially best friends! We would like to have a picnic. Most of the time our friends are moving away and this would be the time for us to hang out with them. We have worked hard throughout the year and we’ve been getting good grades. Some families have never been there before. We would like to go because some of us would like to get to know kids in our class better during the summer. We would like to go to Silverwood Theme Park because it would be a time for friends to hang out. We have worked through ISATS, quizzes, and tests. If you were to allow us to go to Silverwood it would be the best fieldtrip EVER!!!! We would have the time of our lives and we would thank you! This fieldtrip would be amazing. Some of the students in our class have either never been there before or have only been there once. This would encourage parents to go there with their children for family fun. All of our class wishes to go so please try to consider it. I am one of the students that have only been there once because my family is seriously broke! That one time I went… my mom said I would probably never get to go again, and I wish to go again. I hope that you like this, and I hope that you will try to consider us going, I also really want to go!!!! I have a feeling that I might never get to go again if we don’t win this. I appreciate your time to even give us a chance for this field trip. We would thank you. I would like to go because Silverwood is the most fun place you could go. My favorite ride was Tremors. My second favorite ride was the Aftershock. I also remember Log-ride… that was pretty rockin!